Beginning the Editing

Today I begin the editing. I take into account all the changes suggested to me by my first editor...Lindsey. Apparently....I use ellipses too much and incorrectly...I kind of knew I over used ellipses...but I had thought it was my style. It seems this is not my style since I am trying too hard to achieve it...and using it incorrectly. This saddens and bothers me, but sadly I must do what I must do, and so I go....wish me luck!